How to get a customer through collabs and emails

Hi hope you’re okay,

I’m a local car detailer, and basically, I make cars super clean and better than when you picked them up! I wondered if you’d be interested in working out a deal where I can clean your cars and maintain the standard monthly at your home or workplace for complete convenience! Let me know if you’d be interested in sorting something out; I can pop in for a chat!

Also, all of our services are tax-deductible under vehicle maintenance!

Thanks,
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Hi hope you’re okay, would you be interested in a collab?

I’m a mobile valeter and detailer and basically, make cars look sick and super clean! I can sort you a deal on whatever package suits you and (if mobile) the mobile travel is on me!

Thanks👍🏻